My rating: 2 of 5 stars
2 stars for this book
all of the thing about this book is at the middle of nowhere, at least for me.
the world building is not decent enough for picturing the entire village/ kingdom yet the world. everything is wrote around the character which ridiculous long and waste a lot of the pages from this books, that made the story is still going nowhere.
there are two of them whom became the main focus in this book, Rachel and Logan and the story about them are switches in every chapter of this book, and of course drama between them is happen A LOT.
So, based on what i read 1/3 of this book is about Rachel and Logan and their drama of course. 1/3 is about the character itself, either main characters or support and the rest is about the problem they’re facing.
Rachel, a woman that thinks that she is brave and smart but the other hand she just a daughter who confused with what happen and lost in the way to figure it out.
Logan, a man who rejects Rachel but on the contrary, he just realize that he’s falling in love with her. Smart enough to make a plan and figure out thing but sometimes he is over thinking and have too much scenario in his brain. I know that he call it cautious but kinda makes him a little weak, for me.
The Commander, Jared and any other characters. Can’t saying much of them because like what i’m saying in the first place, this book is not about them. XD